Feedback Strategies.

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In the feedback gallery,  there  is a section that has comments talking about ways to expand the story. I think this is an important tool because this easy you can contribute to expanding the authors way of thinking. Sometimes as authors we already have a background in the topic and we are not as detailed as we should be in our stories. We sometimes with out knowing it we don't  go into as much detail as we should.

Something that I did not do in Epics of India class is point out the things that confused me in the stories. I would stop reading it and click a different one if it was confusing. This semester I think I need to stick to the story and ask the author about what was they meant in the story. I would hope someone would mention anything confusing about my stories because their feed back could help me improve as a story teller.

I enjoyed reading the article about negative feedback. Specifically the section about a fixed mindset. I think in life we tend to have a fixed mindset sometimes and it is important to be open-minded to receive what the author really wants you to receive in the story!

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