Reading Notes Part B: Mr.Miacca
This story, Mr.Miacca comes from the storybook English Fairy Tales told by Joseph Jacobs.
This story is about a boy who did not listen to his mother. He was sometimes a good boy and sometimes a bad boy. He decided not to listen to his mother when she told him not to go in the street by himself or he might get caught by Mr.Miacca. Mr.Miacca is known for capturing kids. That is exactly what he did with him.
In my story I want SpongeBob to play the little boy. I want to make the story a little more interesting. I actually want SpongeBob to put up a hard fight, unlike the little boy did. He managed to talk Mrs.Miacca into letting him go get some pudding for her from his mothers house. He had finally escaped. He continued to be good and not go around the corner. However, one day again he went around the corner and got caught again.
He ended up getting his leg chopped off and put in the pot.
I like this story but I feel like there should be more to it. I feel like there should be more drama added and that is what I plan to do with my version.
Comments
Post a Comment